On it my innocence mocked!
We did not hold hands
As we stepped into my college.
Of life's responsibilities and duties on my shoulder,
I carried a heavy baggage.
We hugged when I got a job,
Adding to my family's income.
With loads of over-timings and insomnia,
Success and promotions was the expected outcome.
Now I hold her hand
When in the park we take a walk
This results from the irony brought by
The moving hands of the clock!
When she grows weak
I'll lift her in my arms.
With the same love and care
With which she protected me from all harms.
6 comments:
Touching :) and Very well written :)
@Amitansh: thanks! :)
Myriad of emotions!!
Perhaps,if you would have incorporated few more hyperboles and metaphors,the effect gonna more charismatic.
@Gaurav: true that! keep visiting n pouring in ur inputs! :)
Perfectly framed emotions! :-)
Hi, I don't really understand these kind of writings keenly, but I can these are some great piece of work. It is good that we have talent like you at IITK. I wish, you collect all your writes, bundle them as a book and publish it. This will make your work available to public. I have not seen any upload in 2015. Keep writing. All the best.
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